This is a freestyle i came up with...so that rap groups or whatever tell me if it good(not dissing a

I鈥檓 the best in the ring like 鈥淐assius Clay,鈥?known ta smash ya face, and slash ya tapes//

I got a flow like 鈥淢asta Ace,鈥?this kid better off trying to find GOD like 鈥淧astor Mase鈥?/

I hope this kid 鈥渉eard me right鈥? he belong in the dirt so I鈥檓ma leave him 鈥渂uried right鈥?/

He鈥檚 just a 鈥渨orried dyke鈥?and the 鈥渨ord鈥檚 he writes鈥?are too sweet, they bad for my 鈥淧early Whites鈥?/ (haha)

This kids a 鈥渦seless bother,鈥?I鈥檓 blazin man, how could u even think this 鈥渄ude is harder?鈥?/

I鈥檓 鈥淩uthless Patna,鈥?I鈥檝e accepted ya battle so I can beat this kid like an 鈥淎busive father鈥?/

I sway a lil bit, but I鈥檓 鈥渃ool with tha tech,鈥?after this battle this 鈥渂oy鈥?will be 鈥渓osin his rep鈥?/

I鈥檒l leave him 鈥渂ruised in the neck,鈥?cuz I aint losin to a kid who aint hit 鈥淧uberty yet鈥?/

No need to 鈥淏eware of this Kid,鈥?trust me I aint 鈥渟cared of this *****鈥?/

He a trick, 鈥淲ho care鈥檚 if he spits?鈥?eh yo kid, holla at me when you get 鈥渉air on ya dick鈥?/

This kid shoulda 鈥渒ept it clean鈥?cuz I鈥檓ma hit this ***** hard like a 鈥淒empsey Swing鈥?/

鈥淒on鈥檛 tempt the fiend,鈥?on the Mic, cuz I鈥檓ma be the last man standin in the 鈥渆mpty ring鈥?/

Nothin this kid says can hurt me, he couldn鈥檛 be the early bird that gets the worm if he 鈥淪howed up early鈥?/ I鈥檒l spit tha fire and leave him 鈥渟lowly burning,鈥?And my lyrics will hit this ***** out tha park like a 鈥淗ome Run Derby鈥?/

This is a freestyle i came up with...so that rap groups or whatever tell me if it good(not dissing anyone)?

Thats good man...you'll be a high prospect...

This is a freestyle i came up with...so that rap groups or whatever tell me if it good(not dissing anyone)?

you thats awsome dude how long did it take u you have mad skills yo

This is a freestyle i came up with...so that rap groups or whatever tell me if it good(not dissing anyone)?

It was kinda dumb. It was ok i guess....srry

This is a freestyle i came up with...so that rap groups or whatever tell me if it good(not dissing anyone)?

that was pretty dope... now check this out...

http://www.spityourbestverse.com/videos/...

my song won single of the day for two days